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Reading Reviews for The Dark Shadow
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by slytherin_scorpio Chapter 3

31st October 2017:
Love how you portray Ginny even at middle-aged as a bit of a prankster and joker, and Harry as a tiny bit moody and over-serious at times but such a softy he caves in. Next chapter please!

Author's Response: Thanks, again, for the feedback. Working on new chapters now.

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Review #2, by slytherin_scorpio Chapter 2

23rd October 2017:
You bring relationships across so well! I really liked Albus and Scorpius's exchange. More please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback!

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Review #3, by slytherin_scorpio Chapter 1

23rd October 2017:
A handful of spelling and grammar mistakes but not too much to fret over. Immensely enjoyed how you wrote Albus and Harry's relationship. I wonder, did you know Lilly's name is spelt 'Lily' in the books? Up to you of course to correct. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oop I never noticed the "Lily" thing. Thanks for the heads up! I would correct it but I'll probably make the same mistake in the future. My grammar and sentence structure isn't the greatest. Thanks for the feedback.

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Review #4, by alaysia cuffie Chapter 1

22nd October 2017:
this chapter was very good

Author's Response: Much appreciated.

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Review #5, by slytherin_scorpio Prologue

22nd October 2017:
So so good! Great tension-building and well written. I can see there is a second chapter but already I want more to read! Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Here's hoping you enjoy the other chapters.

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