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Review #1, by HarryGinnyLove88 Ginny Potter

20th January 2018:
James is too big mouth 🙂🙂🙂 but it was also very sweet :)

Author's Response: Yeah, he really does have a big mouth

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Review #2, by HarryGinnyLove88 Letter for St. Mungos

7th January 2018:
Good old Harry heh 🙂🙂🙂

Author's Response: I hope you ido like how I’ve shown Harry so far :)

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Review #3, by HarryGinnyLove88 Teach A Lesson

3rd January 2018:
I hope James not mad at Nautica when he find out she know..
Write soon :)

Author's Response: I feel like James is understanding for the most part so I think it’ll be okay :)

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Review #4, by MalfoyMannor CareTaker

2nd January 2018:
love your story :)

can't wait till the next chapter

Author's Response: Awh thank you :D
Soon, I promise !

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Review #5, by Eyo CareTaker

28th December 2017:
A sweet filer not much to say :) It was a very Christmas chapter. Felt like a late gift forgotten under my Christmas tree. Thank you and Happy holidays

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)))
Updating soon!

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Review #6, by HarryGinnyLove88 CareTaker

28th December 2017:
Thank you for writing :)
Do it again soon...

Author's Response: Will do !!! Working on the next chapter now

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Review #7, by Scose CareTaker

28th December 2017:
Aw i think the scene when they sleep in bed was so sweet. I look forward to reading more. Loving this story!

Author's Response: Awh thank you :D I really loved writing it

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Review #8, by Eyo Go Gryffindor!

3rd December 2017:
Dramas everywhere!

Jamess reaction to Mollys pregnancy I cant wait for it. I hope he will not tunnel his anger on Nautica because a cancer is after all way worst that a pregnancy you can interrupt. And well the responsibility lay to Santia and Molly. If you are dumb enough to not protect yourself well you are the only one to blame.

Nautica and James though make a really strong pair. Maybe a little bit too fast I think? I mean I love when right from the start a couple Ismail together in a story and you see them confront life together and having their relationship growing because of theses challenges. Like her cancer, but right now James mostly is already saying some pretty deep stuff? Is its simply immaturity not understanding fully well his feelings?

Either they make a really strong couple and I cant wait how their feeling will volutive between each others.

Thanks for the reading and I see you on the next chapter! Cant wait :)

Author's Response: You know, I agree that maybe they are moving so fast. I was thinking about changing the fact that he already knew he loved her, but then again, sometimes you just know. It’ll be awhile at least before he says it.
We will find out more about his reaction soon:)
Thank you so much for the review !

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Review #9, by Violet Potter 434 Go Gryffindor!

1st December 2017:
hey its me! i'm back!
you thought you'd got rid of me but i'm still here chilling in the corner

and I don't know how, I managed to miss like 5 updates so today was a nice surprise

I love this story, though keep crying and you are the blame for that my friend

the latest chapters were amazing so update for me soon!

love me xxx

Author's Response: Hey ! I’m really glad that you’re still sticking around for the read:) Thanks so much for sticking by Nautica and James as they figure it all out.

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Review #10, by HarryGinnyLove88 There's Something You Should Know

26th September 2017:
Hope she make it she deserve this for her sake and James too 🙂

Author's Response: Thank you :) this is going to be far from easy for either of them, but love prevails hopefully . Thank you for the review!

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Review #11, by Siriuslyremus Snapping

15th September 2017:
Finally! Ready for her to admit her feelings

Author's Response: Yeah I was for sure as well,

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Review #12, by HarryGinnyLove88 Snapping

14th September 2017:
Awww so sweet kiss 😚
But Al...hope he forgives her 😯
Write soon ☺

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Keep reading to find out what happens!!!

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Review #13, by A Fan Emotions and Firewhiskey

7th August 2017:
Great chapter! I love all the scenes where Nautica expresses her devastation/anger/fear. They feel so real and raw.
So Karen is Teddy's fiance, hm? And she "trusts her friends wholeheartedly" too. I hope you're planning on Teddy/Victoire having their happy ending, but it sure sounds complicated.

I love James but I have a soft spot for Santiago z and I keep hoping that you'll explore some romantic dynamics between Nautica and him as well! They have great chemistry.
Hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for the review:) I won't deny that I thought maybe slipping in Teddy and Victoire would be fun or maybe doing a spin off.

And I've considered her and Santiago but I'm not sure yet. You'll just have to read to find out !

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Review #14, by HarryGinnyLove88 Emotions and Firewhiskey

31st July 2017:
Thank you for another chapter, i love reading this story :)
Hope you update soon ☺☺☺

Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for reviewing

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Review #15, by Violet Potter 434 Confrontation

25th June 2017:
another great chapter just like usual

this review is going to be really short cause I just got back from a practise DOFE walk and feel like I died along the way

but yeah it was amazing and I cant wait for more

love from me xx

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry you were so exhausted.

Glad you enjoyed ! -xoxo

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Review #16, by Guest Confrontation

22nd June 2017:
This story really hits home. My older sister was 21 when she died from cancer this January. She was diagnosed 3 years ago and given 6 months to live. It started in her lung and spread to her brain before we even had a chance to catch it. She went through so much, including 2 brain surgeries and 2 lung surgies. And like Nautica, there was a boy who liked her and had liked her since they were 16 years old. About 2 years ago he was trying to get her to go out with him and she denied him on the same principle that she didn't want him to have to watch her die. But he wore her down and they ere together for 2 years before she died. And he did watch her die. He was in the hospital along with my family holding her hand as she slipped away. So I honestly can't say why I read this when it mimicks my own life so completely, but I guess I'm hoping for a happy ending. And even though it's been a hard six month without her I'm really glad that she dated that boy. I think both of them were. She got to experience falling in love. And that's one of the greatest gifts you can have. So I really hope that nautica will accept help. Even if it's not from James, having friends there means everything. My sister always had so many visitors when she was in the hospital and she was surrounded by friends and family in her final moment and she always found a way to smile with her friends around. Santiago and Tess seem very supportive of her and I hope they stick by my side. It's sad that her parents aren't very close because I know how hard the experience is for everyone involved and my parents and my family are very close. So even though nautica is just a character in your imagination, I really hope that everything goes well for her. The thing about cancer is that is takes away that saying that "good things happen to good people" because sometimes bad things happen to good people. And it's not logical and it's not deserved and it tears about everything you used to think. But that's just what cancer does. So I'm sorry for this super depressing review but I just wanted you to know that I know what Nautica is feeling even if it's Second hand through my big sister. So I really hope that Nautica pulls through and that she lets her friends and the people who care about her support her and give her a shoulder to lean on because it really does make all the difference.

Author's Response: I'm very sorry for your loss. She and him sound like they had an amazing love story. It's profound that she got to experience that. I hope you continue to enjoy this and It means the world that you would read it despite your sisters story. Thank you so much for leaving a review .

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Review #17, by putitonpaper Resignation

22nd June 2017:
This is a really good concept. Unfortunately, I couldn't read the entire chapter. I'm sick and also had a recent loss so there are just a few triggering things in here that I couldn't get through. And this just seemed like way too good of a story to skim, ya know?

So I hope to return to this and read it fully but I still wanted to comment and let you know that I thought what I was able to get through was very well-written and it seems like you're going to tell a very deep and thoughtful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing even though I know you're probably not feeling too up to it. My condolences for your loss and I hope that when you do get a chance to read that you do enjoy it:)

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Review #18, by Molly Rae Confrontation

22nd June 2017:
I am loving this story! I particularly enjoy the addition of James' perspective at the end-- I really like how you are working with his character, keeping him true to a certain "prankster, bad boy" image, while adding this genuine, perceptive nature that is so fascinating and really what reels Nautica in. Keep it coming :)

Author's Response: Thanks for much for the review! I appreciate hearing that because I'm not trying to make James too sappy, you know? Kind of reminiscent of his grandfather

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Review #19, by HarryGinnyLove88 Confrontation

22nd June 2017:
Hope Natica change her mind and James tells her the truth.
Great story write soon :)

Author's Response: We will see:) thanks for the review!

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Review #20, by IrisAya Co-Captain

26th May 2017:
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First off, I forgot that I couldn't post two comments on the same chapter, shoot. So I have to post it here @.@ I need to stop rambling one day. So I'm marking this as a possible spoiler, fml because I can't delete the first one I posted and report this second half on the fifth chapter.

While I think Santiago would think it was an abrupt change, for her to interact positively with James. I cant help but think that after her self-proclaimed isolation, due to her feeling so ill and not wanting to talk about her illness, he might be even a bit happy that shes not going back to that. Of course, I cant say for certain lol That blush was adorable and amusing, to me, though, once again imagining his face.

Of course, that ending had me watching my RSS feed consistently to see when the next chapter went into the queue. I made a comment earlier in the comment that Id hoped I would feel well enough to comment before this chapter and this is why, now.

Your A/N mentioned: Please let me know what you think. I wasn't so sure about making her admit fancying James so soon, but oh well...

Of course, I didnt consider something until Chapter 5 (which Ill expand on later), but Ill mention my thoughts prior to that. I didnt think it too early for Nautica to acknowledge that she possibly or did fancy him. Theres a fair difference from admitting you might enjoy flirting with someone, his reactions, and his appearance versus wanting to date him or pursue him.

Then, after you entered Chapter 5 into the queue I reread and thought about Chapter 4 again. I considered that isolating yourself, to an extent, from your friends and having no real confidant/e regarding her difficulties with schooling and symptoms, could result in her being more likely to admit it to herself.

Especially with her recent interactions with him that show a bit of a newer side to him. Im not saying that it drove her to think about it or think it only because of that and not her true feelings. Im just thinking that it can aid the process along to coming to that point to consider something you mightve not considered without it. I hope that made any sense at all.

Chapter 5ish:

Im happy that her teammates and friends now know what is happening to Nautica. But Im also saddened that it happened because of the incident at the quidditch match and not on her terms as she felt a bit pushed/forced into it, in a way.

I was hoping for a different answer from Im sorry from many of her teammates, but its an understanding immediate reaction of course.

I understand Santiagos reaction and Nauticas reaction, but I especially like that they were understanding of each others feelings and what backed them. Sounds like a healthy friendship, and she needs that sort of support now. I also enjoyed that she admitted that she could barely admit the cancer to herself, let alone anyone else.

After the last chapter, I was certain that James would visit Nautica after hours in the Hospital Wing and I enjoyed being correct on that thought. I was a bit thrown by the confession though.

It also feels very Nautica, with not wanting to burden her friends etc., to want him to leave because she wouldnt want to hurt James if anything happened. Breaks my heart for both James and Nautica, especially when James finds out (though I look forward to him possibly figuring out why she might have refused him then.)

Just, poor Nautica :( I hope it gets better at least, considering her friends now know and can help her out.

Thank you for updating and for writing this fic, of course! I look forward to the next update and hope that its soon, but I completely understand how long it can take to write if needed.


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Review #21, by IrisAya A visit

26th May 2017:
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So, Ive been following this from when you posted the first chapter. Ive been meaning to comment before this, particularly before this newest chapter was posted. The main thing thats kept me from it is that Ive been quite ill. So, this might combine all comments for the chapters into one, I apologize in advance for the huge comment that will inevitably come (because Im too lazy to split it up, partly because the later chapters have obviously changed parts of comments.)

Chapter 1ish:

I generally dont start reading fics before there is at least a few chapters updated consistently, but I saw the topic and had to read it to see if I wanted to follow it. I absolutely understand what Nauticas going through, not the same thing, but the end of December 2016, I was suddenly diagnosed with something awful.

In comparison to Nautica, the only possible treatment for my condition, period, was two major operations. Though, the nature of the surgeries required sections of my hair to need to be shaved for the incisions etc. The doctors and surgeons obviously saw my horror (like Nautica I LOVE my hair) and made sure to reassure, multiple times, that it wouldnt be a long-lasting issue and it would grow back.

For the next month, my main concern was What is going to happen to my hair? and a bit of outrage when it happened. I couldnt bring myself to look at the damage to my hair when I had the first surgery a month later (and my mum further destroyed my hair because she apparently doesnt know how to handle hair other than pin-straight hair.). I feel Nautica on the topic SO much, Im not a teen anymore, particularly when it first happened, so I cant even IMAGINE how poorly I would have reacted if I had been a teen! Though I do hope shell hit the point where she no longer cares much about it, in the weight of the other symptoms that are getting serious.

Chapter 2ish:

I kind of enjoy that shes hard on James, Freddy, and Jeremiah knowing that other prefects/etc. will let things slide. But thats probably just the kind of person I am.

Actually when this chapter came out, I thought James comment was related to the rumor that Nautica had resigned, and that he believed the rumors. It was this quote:
"Come on, Pheonix," James says, a twinkle in his eye as he steps forward slyly. "We're just having a bit of fun: you can understand that, yeah?"

It made me think of a few possible reasons circulating for her resignation from Captaincy.

Though, I was a bit worried about Nautica when they disappeared because you mentioned flying/hitting the outer wall. I was worried, until the next section, that shed end up being hurt from the incident. At least that didnt seem to happen. Apparently by this point Id already become rather attached to Nautica.

Though I dont quite relate on the not telling her friends, not that I blame her at all. My friends and coworkers know that Ive had health issues for years and the diagnosis suddenly explained a ton of things. So Im used to my body failing me, to a certain extent. But I can emphasize with her considering her body hasnt ever and how jarring that would be. At this point, Id hoped that her friends would find out soon, because it can be super lonely and its good to have people around you that can understand why you may be acting oddly or snappishly.

Final comment on that chapter, I kind of love Freddy, just his personality I guess.

Chapter 3ish:

Oh man, disgusting medicine, I feel for you Nautica. Hopefully it works in the long-run though!

"Why do you keep asking?"

Oh yes, Freddy why do you keep asking?

Im kind of curious as to what is causing Nautica to faint. I wonder if its a side-effect of the potion or something like that. Either way, not enjoyable in any way, especially if it happens often.

At the same time, I understand why James woke Nautica up, but at the same time Im annoyed (with Nautica) at him for doing it. Especially because shes obviously there for a legitimate reason.

Of course, my previous thought about James believing the rumor that shed resigned and possibly reasons behind it were proven false here, but it was also nice.

With his honestly about the bludger incident (blaming himself) and why he does silly pranks (and that question about the statue), thats when I began to get an image (on my earlier hunch from Freddy) that James had liked her for at least a bit. I also liked, a bit, how Nautica honestly thought on him enough to really decide if she had hated him, truly, and a possible reason why.

I can only imagine (with my idea of his feelings and having now read this chapter) how James will react when he finds out the true reason shes in the Hospital Wing and resigned.

Re: losing hair, see above also. Once again, I feel totally in-line with Nautica on this. I basically lost it when I first take a full look at my hair post-surgeries.

I cant blame Nautica for snapping when the bucket of blue goop fell on them, I would too. Im imagining James and Freddys faces and Im laughing to myself about it. I wonder who it was meant for, though, and a bit wow on Jeremiah still laughing when it wasnt even meant for them!

Chapter 4ish:

At least it hasnt gotten worse, I mean its not great that the mass hasnt improved, but frankly with something like this, no news is sometimes good news still.

Im happy shes still able to be a prefect, but I cant help but wonder how long itll last. Especially with her mental list of symptoms :/

I enjoyed this chapter particularly, because Nautica showed signs of being able to move past the panic-mode of a new diagnosis and think things through a bit more. I loved the Co-Captain idea and enjoyed her playfulness with James after she spoke to Tessla about Co-Captaining.

Author's Response: Hey there. So real quick, I am writing this on my phone. I'd use my lab top but haven't had a chance with a new puppy in the house. But I want to say thank you for all of your feedback. I'm sorry to hear about your own health issues. I haven't had any like Nautica is going through; however, I do have my own health problems. I think this story is a more serious version of what I've gone through.
I've made Nautica to be a very selfless person on most fronts. She doesn't like to burden people, and from what I've shown of her parents, I hope you can see why. If her emotions seem to be dipping back and forth, I feel that that would be more realistic. I know I've struggled many times with what I'm feeling from day to day. I have sort of an outline on where I want to take this story and I hope that if there's ever anything that doesn't seem right or should be changed that you'd let me know. But again, I really do appreciate that you've taken the time to follow Nautica on this journey. :)

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Review #22, by Potterhead1994 A visit

24th May 2017:
It was touching, the confrontation between her and Santiago . And oh, her and James .

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Review #23, by Violet Potter 434 A visit

24th May 2017:
I love it and its great but I have a science exam tomorrow so I cant say much more than
i'm sorry this is short and
please write quickly

love from me xxx

Author's Response: Well, good luck on your exam! Thanks for taking time for me then!

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Review #24, by Violet Potter 434 Co-Captain

14th May 2017:
Ugh I need more

You can't just say she likes James and make her collapses and leave me at that

I wanna see his reaction

Its so amazing - this story
And chapter
For that matter

I love it so much

Please update soon

Love from me xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing again! I appreciate it and I'm glad you love the story:) update coming soonish.

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Review #25, by The Justice League Co-Captain

14th May 2017:
I hope her friends find out next chapter, ns I love all the conversations with James!

Author's Response: Okay I'm glad you like the interactions between her and James. I was worried about that:) thank you so much for reviewing!

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