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Review #1, by AbraxanUnicorn { meet }

18th March 2017:
Hello!

This is an intriguing start to a story and quite unlike anything I've read before :) Your writing has pulled me in and now I really want to know what's going on? I'm guessing somehow Al and his family have ended up in an alternate reality where they actually exist?

I like your teenage Al; it's similar to how I picture him in my head. Just out of curiosity, in which country is this story set? Apologies if I missed something obvious!

I can't wait to see where you take this story, I think it has huge promise! BTW, I'm a INFP too ;)

Brax X

Author's Response: Wowie, that was fast.

I totally understand your confusion! I think you mean a reality where they don't exist. And no, it's nothing like that actually. I haven't yet seen a story where the Harry Potter books are available to the muggle world yet (whereas these books in the Wizarding world would be classified as non-fiction), so I guess that's what I'm writing. There's not much I could tell without giving away what the story is about. Oh well, what can you do?

This does take place in Britain actually, but I know why you'd feel that way. I've only ever been to an American school, and the Internet is kind of unhelpful if you haven't experienced going to a educational establishment in Britain!

Thank you for your kind words, my writing style is always ever shifting, and it's nice to know you like it.

P.S. I am an ISFP, one letter off!


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