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Reading Reviews for Perpetually Unprepared
  
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by HarryGinnyLove88 Chapter Two

12th September 2017:
I like it :) hope you continue write.
Hurray Bex and Al 😄😄😄

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it! :) And yes, I'm having a lot of fun writing, so the next chapter will make its way on here eventually :)

Yayyy Bex and Al :)

Thank you for taking the time to review!! Have a wonderful day! xx


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Review #2, by beka_wotter Chapter One

2nd August 2016:
I really like this, my fave character is Al but I still want to read more about them all, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Al is such a cutie, isn't he! :) Oh my gosh, thank you SO much for the kind words - and for taking the time to leave a review!! Truly keeps me inspired to keep going and write more! See you in the next chapter!! Have a great day :)

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Review #3, by whatsthetimemrwolf Chapter One

31st July 2016:
This seems pretty cute- I like your take on the characters so far! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and for taking the time to review!! Means a lot :) See you in the next chapter!


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Review #4, by Anonymous Muggle Chapter One

25th July 2016:
Hi,

Well paced, awesome first sentence, lots of well defined, likeable characters. Technically excellent.

Very natural dialogue. I loved your appropriate use of expletives.

The early dialogue could use extra pronouns, maybe. Every "quote" needs a 'Name said' behind it, even if it seems repetitive to you. It will help hammer names in to my dull brain. Just a thought.


Keep writing! What happens next?!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for the kind words!! :) Hahaha, I'm glad you enjoyed my use of curse words; it's my favorite past-time XD

Hmm, I'm definitely taking a note of making the dialogue more clear! I guess it's just my style of writing; I like to have it all out there like that because it makes the readers figure out what's going on and/or shape the scene how they like it. But yeah, I agree that maybe for the first few chapters I should make it a little clearer so no one gets confused!

Thanks again SO much for your review!! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. Stay tuned for some more fun! :) Have a fantastic day!


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Review #5, by pinkpanther16 Chapter One

25th July 2016:
Wow, I love this story already! Usually it takes me a few chapters to get into a story, but you started this one off beautifully. As for favorite characters, right now I really like Al and Bex. Super excited to see their relationship grow in the coming chapters. Even though Scorpious was there for like .2 seconds, I loved his character and hope we get to see more of him soon. And yes, ROSE IS A TOTAL BADA**! Loved this first chapter. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next one! :D

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much for the kind words!!! This really made my day :) I'm SO pleased that you like the story so far!! Not going to lie, I haven't written a chapter this fast like, EVER, so this story is quite special to me and I'm just so glad another person agrees!

Yes, Scorpius is quite something isn't he :) Don't worry - he'll be prominent coming up! Al and Bex are so lovely, bless them. Thanks again for the review; truly means a lot!!! Have a fabulous day :)


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