41 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EmmyBacon Rule 201: When a Marauder's Girlfriend(s) Insists Upon Meddling...

13th December 2017:
What a brilliant chappie!
I've been following for a while and was delighted to see an update.
I'm getting intobthe habit of reviewing more as I know it's nice to hear feedback.

I'm so delighted Lyla is more of her old self again. After all she's been through it's nice to see this side of her breaking through.

Yaaay for James and Lily. That was one too notch date 😊

Congrats on getting back together and writing again ladies. I started again after many years and it's truly a reminiscent time. It's sad that the sight doesn't get as much traffic as it used to but the ones who are worth it are still here 😊

Keep up the awesome work

Author's Response: Seriously, thank you so much for the review! I know that it can be hard to sometimes write one (I too am guilty of reading and not reviewing) so we really appreciate it! We're super glad Lyla is back into the swing of things as well; of course she's a bit more of a boss now, because she's gone through some stuff, but she's come out even better on the other side! We finally got them together after about 60+ chapters (including the old story) of waiting lol it is nice to be back in the swing of things; it's like a reminder of all the good times we had growing up, and being able to access those now (but hopefully as much better writers haha). Thanks again for the review! Hope you enjoy the chapters to come!

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Review #2, by Tid-bit Rule 93: Man with the Plan

11th September 2017:
Please keep writing! I love your stories

Author's Response: Thank you so much! We are diligently working on the next chapter, which is one section away from being completed and ready for the queue! We hope to have it up for you soon! :)

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Review #3, by Natasha Rule 21: Liquid Problem Solving

4th September 2016:
Hi! This is my first review but I really love this story so I had to leave one. I started reading can't touch this a few years ago and recently came actoss it again and decided to reread it and found the marauders guide to all things good. I just wanted to say that i am a big fan of the stories and its so nice to see such a well written peice of fan fiction. the marauders guide is an excellent read. I really like the way you're dealing with such sensitive topics and issues in such a realistic manner. My heart is breaking for Lyla, Remus, Alexa with everything they're going through right now. I saw that you have updated the story recently which is such a relief as I can't wait for more! Thank you for such an excellent read and I sincerely hope there's more to come!😊

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving such an awesome review! We're so happy that you're enjoying the story! Hopefully, we'll be able to live up to expectations in the future chapters! We're definitely not abandoning this story, and though chapters may be slow coming, we are definitely going to finish it! Thanks again for the review!

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Review #4, by desigirl557 Rule 131: Catching a Break

9th February 2016:
So I just came upon this story, and I have to say that I'm really liking the direction you're going with this. I'm curious to find out whether or not you're going to be making this an AU or follow the books. Personally, I'd like to see this go AU, just to see what could have possibly happened otherwise, but I'm still very interested to see how this story will end. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for stumbling upon us! We love it when new readers stop by to tell us what they think! :) We've got a general idea of whether or not we'll go AU, but things can always change! Thanks for stopping by and we'll definitely update soon! :)

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Review #5, by Amanda Rule 131: Catching a Break

3rd February 2016:
I kind of figured all along that Lyla would not end up having this baby. However, it's still depressing to read because your OCs have become like family to me and it's hard watching them suffer through these trials. The portrayals of the Marauders are wonderful! It's devastating to know that there are only so many ways for their plots to work out bc we already know their futures... BUT. Keep up the writing and PLEASE update SOON! 88 thumbs up, love!


Your loyal fan, Amanda (;

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for the review! It's awesome knowing that people are still out there reading :) Yes, it's always really hard to write the tragic stuff that happens to our characters, but you're right in saying there are only so many ways this can end :( but really, thanks for reading! We'll be trying to get the next part up soon! xx Prongslittleflower

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Review #6, by pottergirl510 Rule 72: Never Leave A Man Behind

5th July 2013:
I can't believe you finally updated! I has been months! Really good chapter though and I am so happy you didn't stop writing it It is like my favorite fan fiction I love it!! PLEASE don't wait so long to update it was really depressing. You should try post a chapter every week. I loved this chapter it was really good, so glad you're back :)

Author's Response: So, yeah, it's been awhile, hasn't it? I'm so thankful for this review. It really brought a smile to my face and I thank you so much for posting it, even when it took me ages to update! Just so you know, the next chapter has been submitted. :)

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Review #7, by pottergirl123 Rule 15: Foreigners

14th May 2013:
no no no please tell me you didn't stop writing this!! I will cry :'( it is amazing, omg i love it so much

Author's Response: I've added chapter 9 to the queue! Never fear. We are still here...just lacking inspiration greatly. :)

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Review #8, by The Marauder Girl  Rule 15: Foreigners

14th December 2012:
Oh, I fell in love with these characters in 'Can't Touch This'. Your style of writing is superb, and I am so emotionally invested in these characters, I cannot wait for the chapters to come!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Really, it means so much to us to hear that you enjoy our writings and our characters. We hope you'll enjoy what's to come as well! :)

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Review #9, by H. Groves Rule 34: Invitations

14th December 2012:
I must say, I have read through the first book in this series and I am so emotionally invested in these books and characters. I greatly enjoy your style of writing, and am anxiously awaiting the chapters to come. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Seriously, it means more than you know to hear such nice things about our writings! We hope you enjoy the chapters to come! :)

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Review #10, by Boo101 Rule 15: Foreigners

11th December 2012:
I'm so glad I'm in the bait of checking! I just came on here again out of habit and noticed you'd replied to my review and then that you'd updated! Honestly, so happy! :D

This chapter was brill, I really liked all of them just having fun and being teenagers while they can, but I'm getting the awful feeling that all of this is going to be destroyed soon, and something negative and huge is going to happen. I'm really interested to see how you'll break up james and blair and make it James/Lily as listed.

Honestly i love you both for updating and promise I won't lose faith again!!! xxx

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm so sorry it takes us so long to post updates, but I promise we will never give up on this story, even though at times it may seem that we have! Thanks again :)

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Review #11, by Shay_Gryff Rule 15: Foreigners

3rd December 2012:
I don't know if you did this on purpose, but Giacomo is the name of the jester in The Court Jester. Haha! I loved it! But next time please don't wait almost a year to update, one a month is a good approximate number.


Author's Response: We didn't know that, but it makes it even better now! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I promise to try and update more often! :)

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Review #12, by Nikki Rule 15: Foreigners

1st December 2012:
is there a specific reason that Lyla's baby is smaller than normal, or is that just a panic button for the readers?

Author's Response: Just wait and see, just wait and see :)

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Review #13, by Boo101 Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

24th November 2012:
I literally can't wait anymore, I've been checking every other week for about 9 months and lost all hope that it will be updated in a period of time where I can still remember whats going on. If I had more time I definitely would still do that but I don't so I give up but this review is basically to say that I really loved this story and the one before this, they were brilliant and like a drama or soap to tune into! Were brilliant and I think you both write very well :)

Author's Response: DON'T LEAVE! I have updated chapter 8 (it's in the queue) and chapter 9 is ready as soon as 8 gets posted. I promise we haven't abandoned. :D Thanks for sticking with us thus far though, you deserve all the awards babe. :)

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Review #14, by Teila Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

26th August 2012:
If you dont write more I might actually die. :( Please dont kill me and not write soon.

Author's Response: We don't want that at all! *writes furiously* Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #15, by TeilaWeasley11 Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

6th August 2012:
Wow, This is amazing, I couldnt tear my eyes away from it, Awh Sirius and Alexa, Theyre so cute together, See, Im tearing up your writing is that good! x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's always amazing to hear such kind words in regards to our writing! :)

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Review #16, by Parvati_Khatri Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

1st August 2012:
5 months?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Come on! I love you guys and all, but siriusly (pun intended), I'm about to give up on this story if you don't put up chapter 8, and quick!!! Please post it soon, Sirius and Alex are finally together, and I'm awaiting the Italy trip, which I know will be drama filled! And I know you won't disappoint! :P

Author's Response: Hi! Don't give up. I'm editing Elizabeth's chapter now and then I'll put it up. :D

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Review #17, by Shay_Gryff Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

25th July 2012:
That was so sweet! I love how everything has turned out and you had better have some ideas, because the baby A) doesn't have a name; and B) isn't born. they also haven't graduated AND Blair and James are still together, so this is nowhere even close to being done!Update soon!



Author's Response: Haha! I promise many more chapters to come! Thanks for the review!! :)

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Review #18, by JoannaK Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

11th April 2012:
This is one of my favorite stories ever! Please continue it, but I have a question.Why is James/Lily listed as a pairing? I thought it was James/Blair all the way. Also, I am very curious who you will finally match Wormtail up with. Thank you for writing such an awesome story!

Author's Response: Many, many more things to come before we can answer that question! Thanks for reading! :)

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Review #19, by accioshadow211 Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

29th March 2012:
I love this story and the previous one, and all it's characters. Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #20, by Draculoramalfoy11 Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

1st March 2012:
I love this story! It's awesome. Alexa's my fave. Probably because she reminds me of myself.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like Alexa! She's one of my favorites too :)

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Review #21, by Boo101 Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

20th February 2012:
That wedding was SO beautiful!

Author's Response: You're beautiful! Thanks for the review :)

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Review #22, by NymphadoraLupin Rule 97: In Regards to Professional Photography

18th February 2012:
Amazing as usual! This story is amazing and I love it so much!! hurry up and update soon please :)

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Review #23, by marauders4everr Rule 34: Invitations

29th January 2012:
I'm nervous. Lily is joining their crew, but this is a James/OC story and a James/Lily story. What will happen to Blair!?! Will Lily break them up!? I'm nevous. Oh, by the way, this is AMAZING!!! Keep writing and update faster!

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Review #24, by Messrs Leo Rule 34: Invitations

22nd January 2012:
Great chapter! I really love the plot between Sirius and Alexa and I know they are sort of back together, so I hope they last. Love the shake up between Remus and Lyla too! Update soon with Lily because the story can only get better! :D

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Review #25, by Boo101 Rule 34: Invitations

17th January 2012:
Woo! Lily! yay!

Ah, I nearly cried for Remus actually, I feel sorry for him! Great chapter as usual!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! The part with Remus is very tragic isn't it? #poorRemus

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