25 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Derek Chapter 18 – The night before Christmas and all through the Estate.

2nd September 2010:
Several months Charles without a new chapter. I check several times a week. Hopefully all is well and you are over your writers block.

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Review #2, by HowlinMadHowie Chapter 18 – The night before Christmas and all through the Estate.

1st June 2010:
Glad to see you got your block lifted. Great chapter btw, can't wait for Christmas morning to see all the gifts.

Author's Response: Thanks HMH

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Review #3, by Derek Chapter 17 – Vivien, The Lady of the Lake and the Old Potter Estate.

28th April 2010:
What's up. You have me hooked with your stories and a chapter every few days to zilch... Looking forward to reading the future chapters. Keep up the fantastic writing.

Author's Response: Will be posting the next chapter really soon Derek, sorry to everyone for the delay.

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Review #4, by carbine23 Chapter 17 – Vivien, The Lady of the Lake and the Old Potter Estate.

23rd March 2010:
Good stuff, Potter castle !!, is it me or im smelling a big boom next chapter.!

Author's Response: I dunno, am not finished with it yet LOL!

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Review #5, by carbine23 Chapter 16 – Trip to Gringots, Shopping and the Knight Bus

22nd March 2010:
Haha I love thsi chapter!, it's so adorable. Good job!, yah wondering where is Remus and Sirius, and man Harry is a billionare!

Author's Response: Well you have to take into account that broom sales were off the charts on the endorsed lightening bolt brooms and subsequent upgrades, the chocolate frog cards and probably a few more things he was asked to endorse. He has come into the Potter fortune as well and split it with Trinity with most going to her in the end if we know Harry at all. And just when I had them boarding the knight bus I thought man I should have written Sirius and Remus in on that but thought no, much better to have Severus say that to Harry.

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Review #6, by carbine23 Chapter 15 – The first feast of Thanksgiving at Hogwarts and the secrets of the founders

20th March 2010:
Been a while -_-, Great chapter as usual!

This feast is really cool, need a break with all this gobling king talking, manticore friendly yada yada Haha.

Author's Response: Well I did have to get past that. LOL!

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Review #7, by carbine23 Chapter 14 – Ginny’s final gift to Harry

14th March 2010:
Haha, yay the staff is back to it's complete form!.

And I swear, your creativity and imagination is off the hook, including the titanic..the Mayan temple, everything! your so awesome at doing this!!!, waiting for the next chapter now :D. Thank u!

Author's Response: Oh man you know I was sitting here thinking about where some of the diamonds could have ended up and just wrote down a few ideas, some hidden, some found and used, guardians with those hidden and of course hard to reach places with the ones that had no guardians and the Titanic popped into my head, and of course I wanted to send a lot of people out but most of the diamonds would have been easier to get to than others. So without going into great detail I just threw Parvoti and Padma in there LOL!

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Review #8, by carbine23 Chapter 13 – The Quest to see the Goblin King.

14th March 2010:
Great chapter !, I love this, adventure and all :D

And Goblin King is rather nice isn't he? LOL

Author's Response: Actually yes and no, he treats Harry and the other three as equals in a way because of their birthright. However with others I wouldn't count on him doing that. In fact he takes a personal interest in Harry's affairs and I am sure there is a reason beyond what he is telling. Dunno haven't written that far ahead yet LOL!

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Review #9, by carbine23 Chapter 12 – The Quest To See and a few more.

14th March 2010:
Haha, been a while!, freaking busy with school.. So yah
This chapter is awesome, Mione got her sight back, which is good.

You introduce a lot of new monsters!, which is a plus :P
And lol at Luna, she is one dangerous witch isn't she?!, can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Luna is the quiet unassuming one who knows her stuff.

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Review #10, by Derek Chapter 13 – The Quest to see the Goblin King.

11th March 2010:
This is great. look forward to reading your chapters every couple of days. But to post two days in a row. Can't wait to get home from work and finish this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Derek am having a blast with this one and pulling out the stops as much as possible.

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Review #11, by carbine23 Chapter 11 – Return to Hogwarts and Hermoine’s Revelation and Ginny’s Gift.

7th March 2010:
Review time!
Okay okay, another grand adventure is coming soon, and I am very excited for it!, and Harry reacting from the things being kept away from him, just like the old Harry, mad and angry, meaning he is still the old Harry, but in a more mature way, because he didn't snap and hex the lot of them :P

And yah, Ginny wow, even though she is dead now, she is still helping all of them, that's just amazing, so unselfish.

last of all, the last scene where Albus said if Harry will ever turn dark, I would like to see that, You know just for a good change, just for a chapter or two, where Harry is consumed by pure darkness xD, I know it sounds insane, but that would be great just for a change haha.

Overall, superb chapter!, can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Carbine23, I think its doubtful that Harry will ever turn toward the darkness, He did at one time come close after the death of Ginny and if you read on you'll find out when and some but not all the circumstances. You'll find out all about it later though.

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Review #12, by carbine23 Chapter 10 – Severus investigates, Honeymoons, Hermoine’s Quest.

7th March 2010:
Oh wow! Hermoine going blind sounds like a really really bad thing, if she can't read anymore.. that's like saying she lost her magic also!. Reading is her power, my my, I hope she gets her sight back D:.

And poor Harry and Valeria, vacation got cut short , oh well, great powers comes with great responsibility :{

Author's Response: Going? She is blind Carbine23, sad isnt it? Well rest assured our Hermoine always is smarter than most.

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Review #13, by carbine23 Chapter 9 – Hamid seeks a meeting and Wedding bells chime again.

5th March 2010:
A very awesome, fantastic , I am at loss for words but you get what I mean!.

Now now, a lot of puzzles is going through my head, like how many djins are there, ifrits too etc etc. And is Ifrit/djins like a very strong wizard/witch just called a different name?

And Cho and Nisa confessing their love to Harry to one another, wow! if Harry is a damn Sultan, I bet he'll have 4 wives!, no really, he's not like that :P.

Now for the next chapter!, and please update soon, I am very eager to read your story xD

Author's Response: No Wizards and witches for all intents and purposes are mortal, the stronger in power a witch or a wizard is the longer they will live naturally. A Djinn from each tribe and in their various forms, Ifrit, Marid (Oldest original Djinn), Djann, junun and so on are Elementals, born magical creatures that connect with the elements themselves such as Earth, air, fire and water and are immortal unless they fall in love and marry beneath them and then they suffer the fate of mortality. They also can travel between worlds and on other plains of existance. Djinns are quite powerful in their own right and there are very few wizards or witches that could subdue one all by themselves without trapping them in an object. Merlin, Harry, Dumbledore, Neville and even Valeria could possibly but not without some help.

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Review #14, by RREMYWOLF Chapter 1 – Gwain, Josephine and the Ghost Town

5th March 2010:
i absolutely love this story it is wonderfully written

Author's Response: Thanks RREMYWOLF, this last one is the hardest one to write. Hopefully everyone will enjoy the story though.

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Review #15, by carbine23 Chapter 8 – Quidditch and Hogsmeade Weekends made safe

3rd March 2010:
Review time! What to say?! My favorite chapter so far of this story, that's what to say :D.

Btw, there's quite a few spelling errors in this chapter, might want to re-check them for the grammar freak people :P

Also, I am really excited on where things are going on right now, Ifrits, Djins, Djaans, everything !, making me all warm and fuzzy inside haha, and a really good explanation of Peeves being as the first pranksters, and is only helping students who do things originally, good one there :D.

now for the next chapter, which I am very excited to read.

10/10, Keep writing! Thank you

Author's Response: Thanks Carbine23, yes I know about the errors and you know when I was posting I missed those! I swear its my lazy typing. Has anyone noticed yet that I added a character named Isla Fisher and I promise that I did it without thinking and then found out there is an actress by the same name! ACK! Well it would stand to reason about Peeves and why he never bothered the twins Fred and George yet everyone else was a free target right?

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Review #16, by carbine23 Chapter 7 – Hogwarts Erupts and the Potter Twins take action

23rd February 2010:
What can I say? awesome awesome !, Btw I don't what happen to my last review, probably bugged -__-.

Nweiz I love this chapter, please write soon! THANNKS !!!

Author's Response: am in the middle of the next chapter now Carbine so wont be long and thanks!

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Review #17, by carbine23 Chapter 6 – It’s not all about the pranks

20th February 2010:
Review time! Been a while ! >_

Author's Response: Hey wait where is the review? LOL!

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Review #18, by Rayb008 Chapter 6 – It’s not all about the pranks

18th February 2010:
Well here we are at the end of Chap 6 and I'm wanting more. I've read all three of your stories in the past two days and wow...Very well written! Outstanding plots and twists. Can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks Rayb008 its been a blast to write both of them and this last one is, shall we say, rather a bear but I'll more than get through it. At this point I am just hoping my characters don't take on a cardboard cutout feel.

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Review #19, by screaming_madman Chapter 5 – Harry at the Crossroads and Return to Hogwarts

14th February 2010:
I have read all the way through your series over the last few days. They have a wonderful story line and very original ideas.

At first your grammar was horrible, but it has slowly improved over the writing of the stories and is now quite good.

There are several things that I particularly enjoyed. I like your spin on the destruction of Voldemort, bringing back Grindewald and his character twists (would really like to see more of him and his involvement since he is such a powerful wizard), and the recent scene with Harry and Ginny at the beach.

I hope that you stick with this and would love to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Well the grammer was mostly me being lazy with the keyboard and spell check LOL! When I wrote the first one I had no idea I would write a sequel and now here I am writing a darn third story! Thanks SM I am glad you liked the variation I did.

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Review #20, by carbine23 Chapter 5 – Harry at the Crossroads and Return to Hogwarts

13th February 2010:
Wow this story is so heart touching.. nearly cried the scene between Harry and Ginny, that's just so emotional right there! Great job with that scene.

And thank you for the list of all the next-gen kids, mind if I ask, where is Victoire? Daughter of Bill and Fleur. Or did she already graduated?

10/10 as usual :D

Author's Response: Victoire and Jonathan (Ron and Hermoine's oldest) have already graduated.

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Review #21, by carbine23 Chapter 4 – Harry and Draco find themselves surrounded

10th February 2010:
Review time! Oh wow what can I say.. Well first of all this chapter is very bloody well written! Oh yes it's that good.

Secondly, the way you write the story and doing it almost in a daily basis just make me happy and all fuzzy inside, I love reading youre stories and I think people should notice you more! You're very underrated among this website, and I'll do everything I can to make people read you're stuff!, because it must not be missed.

And thank you for putting up the family tree/chart in Chapter 3, that really make things more clear for me :D.

Now finally Princess Nisa is showing what's she's worth for and she's not that much of spoiled brat! Haha.
Overall, 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Princess Nisa has her moments indeed and thanks. Am I underrated? I just do it for fun its up to the rest of the masses to read LOL!

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Review #22, by carbine23 Chapter 3 – Dinner, an uninvited guest and the Order of the Phoenix meets again

10th February 2010:
Oh okay review time! Wow this chapter is intense ! like boiling intense. First of all, you're story has a lot of characters in it, i'm not complaining at all, I think that's a positive note for me. I just want to ask if you can make a chart saying who marry who, and whose kid is who, just doing that may clear all the confusion in the story regarding this matter.

I really like this chapter a lot!, Damali constantly for a lack of a better word "annoying" the hell out of that princess!.

I think Nisa should prove her self more trustworthy so that the Order of the Phoenix could recognize her more and get to know her better.

And the explanation of the Creevey brother getting murdered was just horrific! guts spilling out, that's just nasty haha.

Last note I think, there's a lot of twins in the story so far, but I think that would do good because i'm sensing another epic Prank wars in the future? :D

Overall, great chapter from a great writer!

Author's Response: A chart? you mean charts and graphs? Oh darn I didnt expect that but I'll see what I can do. Sounds like photoshop would come in handy for that LOL! Thanks by the way Carbine23! Yes there are LOTS of twins in the story, mostly because with the Weasley's or at least from the Prewett side it runs in the family.

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Review #23, by carbine23 Chapter 2 – Harry and the Princess and an Old Friend.

8th February 2010:
Haha! Wow this chapter is awesome!
And poor Harry, got a genie in love with him!
A lot has happened and I still can't get over the death of Ginny >:, maybe just a matter of time. Nweiz, looking forward for you're next chapter!, and I think I would re-read you're first and second story because it's that good!.

Author's Response: Thanks Carbine23 I am writing the third chapter as we speak. I know a lot of people are going to be upset at the loss of Ginny but you'll be surprised to still find a Ginerva Potter in this story.

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Review #24, by tim Chapter 1 – Gwain, Josephine and the Ghost Town

8th February 2010:
i am looking foward to this book. i hope you continue soon, your other two books were wnderful. carry on, penname charles!

Author's Response: Thanks Tim, I am working on the next chapter now and almost done and will most likely post today. Look for some really big surprises in this one.

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Review #25, by carbine23 Chapter 1 – Gwain, Josephine and the Ghost Town

7th February 2010:
Lol been waiting for this, another story, another adventure! Wow i'm so excited for you to update.

A lot has changed and I really didn't expect Ginny dying, and Harry marrying Valeria soon. I was a little sad about that, but hey I think Valeria deserves Harry as much as Ginny does.

And the title of the story is pretty good too, keep writing ! =D

Percy being the new Minister of Magic, well I guess not so much surprise there for me, it's just that the Ministry will be a lot more stricter! Haha.

Author's Response: Well remember the twins are in their last year of Hogwarts and Ginny passed during their first year so he has been without her for a while.

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