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Review:morganthegreat says:
nice chapter! it will be interesting to see how draco goes with occlumency, but then again i feel as if he would be good at it since he has (somewhat) control over most of his emotions.

i wonder how it will end up with ginny and draco, although if you write in canon (which by the way, i think you're doing really well with it so far!), they won't be togeher much, if at all. and i wonder what any of her friends will say? if she has any at hogwarts?

i have to say my favorite hp book is either the goblet of fire or the deathly hallows (although it's really dark and there are so many deaths i can't really take it). goblet of fire is fun because we get a picture of the wizarding world outside of britain, as well as they are older and have grown a bit, but like not to the point of where people (especially harry) have to deal with fighting and war and death. besides the last part of the book where voldemort returns of course, but it effected less people at the time. JK Rowling brings in both fun/fantasy of the nature of harry potter but shows the turning of the genre to be more actiony/dark than before. i just really like it in general. plus cedric of course.

hope to see what you write for the next chapter!
-morgan :)

Author's Response: Hello again, Morgan! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Draco seems to be very disciplined, and that will probably help in his Occlumency. I'm actually really excited to write about that.

I love that you're wondering about how it'll end for them. I haven't finished writing the whole story yet (although I know how I want it to go) and there are a few different directions it can still go. If you have a preference or idea, I'd love to hear it.

Ginny still has a few friends at Hogwarts, like Luna and Neville and a few DA members, but a lot happens in the book around this point and I can imagine Ginny feeling very alone.

Those are my favorites, too! I think GoF is so excellent because of the riddles and drama and humor that comes before the danger and darkness, but it was so fitting.

Thank you again for reading and reviewing! I'm trying to work on the next chapter (it's almost done, but life has been crazy!) so hopefully it'll be up within the next week.


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