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Review:morganthegreat says:
wow this was great! it went a little fast in pace, but i really enjoyed it! it makes sense to me that draco would reach out to ginny after giving him the slightest bit of kindness, he really is a distressed man. to me it sounds seamless, with draco being desperate for some type of positive emotion and who knows, anything can happen at a school with this type of situation.

i didn't guess what would happen, but i do know eventually he's going to be summoned to identify the trio at his manor and watch hermione get tourted by bellatrix, right?

as for draco coming to the rescue yet again, it makes sense that this would happen since he isn't really in any deep water because of his blood status and rank with voldemort. he has the advantage of being able to help like a double spy. ginny has and always be such a badass, standing up to terrible authority and being the fierce woman she is. seeing her this vulnerable with the context of who's running the school is important to her character development and i think you did a good job at that!

i really like fred and george as well in all the books, but also really adored lupin - he reminds me of hermione in the group of three marauders, being a prefect, the responsible and sensible one in the group - like hermione is. i also love hagrid and the fatherly role he played in harry's life. even if he wasn't always in every chapter, he supported harry the whole way through. i'm going to stick to my argument that harry should've named his second child albus rubeus instead of albus severus.

anyway i'm excited for your next chapter to come! i love this whole ginny/draco interaction.

-morgan

Author's Response: Hello again, morganthegreat! You should change your penname to morganthegreatEST because you're totally the greatest!

You're right, eventually (not too soon, though) the whole experience at the Manor will happen. And it'll be intense! I feel like Draco needs this opportunity to show that he's capable of being good and kind and heroic, because he totally has it in him.

I'm glad you like Ginny's character so far. She really is so fierce and strong and I want to keep her that way.

Lupin is one of my favorite characters, too. He was just so GOOD, you know? I feel a stab in my heart when I think about him.

AND YES. Albus Rubeus Arthur Remus Potter. Like, throw in the names of some of the people who cared for you without an agenda.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! If all goes well, the next chapter should be posted within the next day or so.


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