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Review:Glisten says:
I like how the book events are coming together with your events. If I'm not mistaken the Snatcher part comes next? So! Excited!

I wonder why he felt like he was being watched? I know that sometimes people randomly have that feeling even if nobody's watching him but something tells me that's not the case… H M M M

I see they're back behind that tapestry again and yes, Ginny's reaction was on point in my opinion. It must be confusing to start caring for someone who's supposed to be an enemy.

I think “Summoned” is good but in case you were still looking for suggestions on the name here's a few:
•The Meeting
•If She Tried (for the “I don't think I could hate you if I tried.” quote)
•The Snake Awakens (for the slithering black Dark Mark)
I also suffer from a lack of titling ability so sorry if these are all terrible, haha.

The terrifying moment has come when the”Next Chapter” button doesn't appear. Need I say your story is fantastic? I'll say it just in case… this story is fantastic! I love your writing style and I can't wait till you publish the next chapter. How will I ever survive the wait!?!

Author's Response: Seriously, thank you for reading and reviewing every chapter so far! Once again, you're the best.

You're close on your guess -- but the Snatcher part comes a bit later. This chapter was set in late October during Deathly Hallows, and something pretty intense happens at Hogwarts in November...that's all I'll say, though!

I'm glad you thought Ginny's reaction was believable. I love Ginny's character and I just hope I'm doing her justice.

Thanks for your chapter title suggestions! I am the worst at naming chapters and stories. Usually I just go for a "Chapter __" sort of thing, but I'm trying something different for this story.

While you wait, check out some of the other great stories I've been following in my "Author's Favorite Stories" section on my profile. There are some incredible stories and authors (in my opinion). And then definitely come back to my story once I have the chance to update it :)

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